need help guys..

[SoSimpo]

i cant make up a poem about love and heartbroken..
it dosnt have to rhyme but it has to be deep..
oh how i hate ela

please help!
thanks in advance

[5fivespeed]

Hmm. I don't know if this helps - but I'll give a shot at a writing piece of mine.

Kind of a heartbroken, I'm getting you back poem. I wrote it.

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Sometimes when we fall, we're destined to get back up again.
Sometimes when life is hard, we're destined to create happiness out of it.
Sometimes when all we have is is ourselves, our memories can make happiness out of sadness.

Sometimes, you know when to wait, to work, to fight for what you truly believe in.
What I belive in, is god. I belive, that this is only a test.
I belive, with faith, prayers, time, confidence and patients the love you believe so deep in, will never fade.

I will wait, and time itself can mend pain temporarily.
I will believe, headstrong and confident
That you and I are simply meant to be "us"
I believe that only god knows this,

I know with your strength, your happiness, your beautiful smile
I can get through anything, and this seems so miniscule in that sense.
I'll have you back, and I promise this in front of the world.
Because forever, I belive.
Sometimes, we are destined to get up.

And here I stand, fallen.
Yet back up so fast, to make triumph over my downfalls.

[Donmega]

lol, i cant emphasize this enough.....ray :poosie: