Artists and Musicians - Please check out my music and provide some feedback!

[brownskind]

I'm a Guitarist and I've been composing/producing Hip Hop/RnB music for a few years. I finally reached a point where I wanted to go somewhere with this so I need honest feedback. I have remixes up there too. I did Justin Timberlakes "My Love",
Lloyd and Lil Waynes "You" and an instrumental for "cant tell me nuttin" by Kanye....

let me know wat u think...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=708488

[brownskind]

and yeA I TOOK some of the pics from digital blasphemy and for some reason not all the songs r working... is this happenin with everyone?

they shud work now i re uploaded them

[Street_Soldier]

the sites so slow. is there anyway i can listen without signing up?


nm its just u cant get the mp3 unless u sign up.

wow i m impressed sounds really good. good work!

[brownskind]

Whens da next beyond meet up..ill bring some cds...

[brownskind]

Oh yea..im also looking for a dj i can make mixtape with...tryin to get acapellas of rapperslike fabolus lil wayne and jay z and put them on my beats..do some remixes... And then get it out there so msg me if ur a dj and ready to work...

[DRKM]

The songs are working fine right now.

The "cant tell me nothing" remix the guitar sounds forced perhaps a little more low key and keep the original sample.

I am enjoying your "My love", I like the kick drum that you used alot. Also the bass sounds really good but it goes out of time around 4:40ish in comparison to the melody . Also I am not really feeling the toms, I would make them start with a triplet...

I like the beat "Step up" I would look for a sample of an Opera singers voice simpler to the sample yhou have in there already but have it follow through more. I am thinking like "the bounce" That timbo beat where the indian lady is singing the back round. I t I just think that it would make the song alot better....

As for the song Clubz I think you should find a female vocal sample to overlay the beat for sure. It would sound amazing.

Just one more comment. You seem to use the keyboardish sounds to builds your riffs around. This can be a mixed blessing since you don't always want your beats to sounds like they came out of a video game from the 80's.
Since you like the Slow jamz try to build around some string layers and bass.

But the music sounds great for sure. I would like to hear more orgianal material since I am not formiliar with lil wayne...

Keep it up!